Hi Geobloggers!
This time I will speak about a classmate's blog, the blog that I revised belong to Camila Sanhueza, her blog have 9 posts. The design of her page is simple but pretty and delicate, she used a green background and I like that because I love the green color xD.
The blog of Camila has 10 photos and has 1 video.
The post that I choose of the Camila's blog is the last post that she wrote and this post is about "A special place in Santiago" and she chose the center of the Santiago city, in this publication she talk about the things that she like doing in this place; her post has 206 words of the 200 minimums that the teacher demanded. I chose this post because this post is the most recent of her publications.
This time I will speak about a classmate's blog, the blog that I revised belong to Camila Sanhueza, her blog have 9 posts. The design of her page is simple but pretty and delicate, she used a green background and I like that because I love the green color xD.
The blog of Camila has 10 photos and has 1 video.
The post that I choose of the Camila's blog is the last post that she wrote and this post is about "A special place in Santiago" and she chose the center of the Santiago city, in this publication she talk about the things that she like doing in this place; her post has 206 words of the 200 minimums that the teacher demanded. I chose this post because this post is the most recent of her publications.
Revision of the blog:
(P)hi english class
Today (P)i'm going to talk about a special place in Santiago that (P)i like to go.
If there is a place in Santiago where (P)i like to go (P) (Sm) is a(WW) centre of the city, where you can find many shops, museums, and you can see many kinds of street art and old and historical buildings.
The truth (P) is(NN) the last time where(WW) i went there was a few months (Sm), because (P)i really have many things to do of(WW) sunday, my prefer(WF) day to go there (because you can find less people and observe better the buildings and his many details), but (P)i think I will go there soon.
I try to go with some friend or my boyfriend, sometimes in the morning for go to museums and see the old people to(WW) go there like a "dominical walk" (sometimes thinking in his(WF) lives), and other times in the afternoon walking around all streets appreciating different buildings on the place, take pictures, and have different kinds of conversation, until arrive to the Forestal Park and get an ice cream for the end come back our homes.
I don’t go there since march or april, but (Sm) writing this I want to go there soon.
Regards.
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